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Between the Devil and the Sea by Chani Lynn Feener

8 reviews

paper_aphid's review

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I wanted sooo bad to finish this book but I just,,, could not. the writing was okay, lots of typos and continuity errors that kind of irked at me but we're easy enough to dismiss. something about it just drags on idk what it is. I stopped at the point where every time I opened it I just could not make it past a page. I'd look at think "are there really 200 pages left? how??". maybe I'll finish it one just for the fact that I bought it. idk.

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jessie_h's review

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adventurous dark emotional mysterious tense medium-paced

4.0


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readers_pov's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark emotional hopeful reflective sad tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.75

✒️ I wanted demons but got aliens. Because of my mistaken interpretation of the synopsis I genuinely thought I was going to read grimdark fantasy with demons, but this ended up being science fiction instead. I didn't realize that the mentions of demons and the devil were metaphorical 🤣 

Intergalactical detectives solving crimes such as murders, was a comfortingly familiar concept in sci-fi setting. The sci-fi aspects felt so natural I could even call it alternate reality. The story focuses a lot on the MCs, but does introduce the crime solving and police work to a satisfying degree. 

I really loved the unique take on empathic abilities. It was written well, but I would have loved even more exploration on that. It was left slightly superficial. Similarly with the world-building. If this was a series, and the story would continue introducing more of the world and everything, then I would be more satisfied with this. 

There were a few spelling mistakes which I found infuriating. But since this is independently published I understand she might not have had the chance to edit it properly. Nevertheless, the writing was exciting and kept me in its grip throughout the whole book. 

Despite my small critiques, I truly wish this would end up being a series, because I want to read what happens afterwards. I want to read more about them being happy, and being themselves and doing what they are good at. 

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 Don't ignore the warnings given by the author! The warnings are there for a reason and if you can't stomach the mentioned things please don't read the book. Please be self-aware of what you can stomach. This is not for everyone. 

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spaghettii's review

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adventurous dark emotional mysterious tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

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jessmg's review

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dark emotional tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.25

Very heavy packed.

As someone really empathetic. I felt really conected to detective Yor. 
The feeling of anxiety, self loathing, struggle to understand or being overwhelmed by emotions are really well portrayed. 

Quite interesting story but be sure to read the warnings... As the author says it. 


Apollo is no gray area, nor a hero or vigilante. He is very dark. 

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elwyn_k's review

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dark emotional mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.0


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nerdyspinster's review

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challenging dark tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

Dark romance between a serial killer and the detective he's obsessed with. Read the trigger warnings.

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mello_cra02's review

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dark tense slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.25

**I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

I wanted to give this book a higher rating because I honestly enjoyed it. The best part is that I got what I was promised from the beginning, a dark romance. A real one, not the kind of dark romance that's just a combination of kinky sex and very bad 'bad boys', and in the end, they have the perfect family XD.

I go for this genre because I want to read about nonconventional relationships and complex characters that may be damaged or don't fit into society's standards. I was more than satisfied with this book in that aspect. The psychology behind each character was remarkable. Every detail about their personality matched their actions and past.

Another great thing about the novel was the world-building. I'm not sure if the author has other books in the same universe but I would love to read them.

The story was interesting enough. I don't remember reading a book with that setting before. I never knew what to expect and I never imagined that things would turn up the way they did.

Why did I give a 3-star rating? There is no solid reason, it was a mixture of small points.

Firstly the book needs some editing. As someone who is studying to become an editor, I could not bypass that many errors. Small things, but they make the reading experience better. I'm talking about switching characters' names, repeating ideas that were already explained in previous chapters, and changing the details of the plot without warnings.

The pacing of the book bothered me a little too. I feel like it could have been a duology. The first part was too long in comparison to the second one. Both could be separated into different books and even extended a little. Otherwise, the end of the story deserves more attention. It's already a large novel, with more depth in their relationship it would be a success.

I think this summarizes all my thoughts. Thank you author for this opportunity. And thanks to BookSirens too.

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