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Hall of Smoke by H.M. Long

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h_s_bloom's review

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.75

 Personal Rating Scale Metrics
  • Characters: ✬✬✬✬ (4/5)
  • Plot: ✬✬✬✬ (4/5) 
  • Pacing: ✬✬✬ (3/5) 
  • Writing Style: ✬✬✬ (3/5) 
  • Diversity: ✬✬✬✬✬ (5/5)
 
This was book 2/50 for 2024. Overall, it was an entertaining read, but the book was very slow to start and I didn't personally relate to the MC very much.

Summary: Hessa, blessed with incredible power, was taken from her home aged 5 along with her cousin to become an Eangi, a warrior priestess sworn to the goddess of war, Eang. Hessa is banished for failing to follow her one of her goddess' commands and whilst she is away begging for forgiveness, most of everything and everyone Hessa has ever come to love in these past years is destroyed. With the other Eangi gone, Hessa is thrust into a power struggle between the remaining populations and later into a similar one happening amongst the gods themselves. Hessa is forced to confront the nature of her power, its source from the Goddess Eang, what it means to be Eangi, and who she could become without it.

Characters: Hessa reads very much as an indoctrinated/religious trauma trope within a viking style fantasy setting. The idea itself and the worldbuilding is really interesting but I found myself feeling quite exasperated with Hessa at times. That being said, I think some of her actions make sense given her upbringing, but I just couldn't feel it for some reason. I myself don't have any religious trauma so maybe that's why?

Plot: Overall, Hessa doesn't really seem to do anything herself, this book is very much a telling of things happening to her. The things that happen are really interesting thanks to the interesting world this book is set in, but I needed Hessa to be a bit more proactive so I could root for her (personal preference).

Pacing: This is another issue. This book was VERY slow to start and I wasn't really engaged until >50% of the way through. Again, the worldbuilding kept me going and Hessa did eventually grow on me, but it shouldn't have taken this long. 

Writing style: It is also just okay, nothing brilliant, but nothing terrible either. The worldbuilding was balanced with other elements and felt very naturally done. 

Diversity: A strong-point for this book was the racial diversity that was present and contextualized. Again, due to Long's good worldbuilding, we were able to meet POC characters and understand a bit about their culture (Hessa was just a visitor in these scenes so I don't think its out of place that she doesn't have ALL of the answers.). 
There is also some LGBTQIA+ representation, though it isn't revealed until near the end. A past relationship is mentioned and it is framed as shameful/negative/toxic, however, its not clear if that's due to the power dynamics, the fact it was likely a minor/adult relationship with implied grooming, or because gay relationships in general are a no-no in this world. 
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onceuponabookcase's review

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adventurous dark mysterious tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.5

I received this eProof for free from Titan Books via NetGalley for the purposes of providing an honest review. 

Hall of Smoke by H. M. Long sounded right up my street when I first heard about it. A war between old gods and new gods? Sign me right up! But while I was gripped while reading, I finished with mixed feelings.

I found Hall of Smoke a little hard going at first. It starts off where Hessa has already failed to kill the traveller she was ordered to by her goddess, Eang. She's at her shrine up on the mountainside, several hours walk from her town, attempting to atone for failing her. And within a matter of pages, her town is attacked, but Hessa is too far away to make any difference. When she finally gets there, she finds her people have been massacred. We're thrown right into the deep end from the very beginning. There's no time for us to get emotionally involved, to feel attached to any of the characters. That's it, done, they're dead.

But at the same time, because it starts right away, we're not really given the opportunity to learn about the people of this world, who they are, what the politics is. We know the Agatti live north on the Eangen, they've never got on, and the Agatti raid Eangen towns a couple of times a year, but nothing ever like this. But we know nothing more at that point. We do get flashback chapters where Hessa thinks back to when she was younger, which gives us some context as to who the Eangen and Eangi are, but it just felt disjointed. And with other groups of people, we find out about them as we go, and it can get confusing when you don't yet understand yet why Hessa is reacting to them the way she is. I feel like there should have been a prologue or something, or the story should have started earlier, to give us some background as to who all the players are and what their politics is, who they worship, the various alliances and enmity between the gods, and the general history of the world as the Eangen people know it. I just had so many questions for the first quarter of the book, and really considered just putting it down. I was confused, and I didn't have time to get emotionally involved, so I also didn't care. The only thing that kept me reading was the fact that the story does move very quickly.

At first, this added to the confusion; between one page and the next, Hessa is on the other side of the world. Granted, she's unconcious for most of the journey, but it was startling. She was just in one situation, and now she's in a completely different situation. But this actually worked in the book's favour. After that first quarter, I had a fair handle on who all the different countries were peopled by and what their poltics was and who they worshipped. Otherwise, we just as much in the dark as Hessa. Hessa is struggling to reach her goddess, who is normally pretty responsive, other gods are in hiding, and other creatures are awakening, and Hessa doesn't have a clue what's happening. She's just lost her people, and is railing through grief, but she doesn't have time to deal with what she is feeling. She has to try and find the traveller and kill him to atone and to earn back her place in the High Halls after she dies, but the world is in chaos at the same time. While it isn't always action, action, action, something is always happening, and it's very fast paced. I still wasn't emotionally involved, and I hadn't connected to Hessa, but the mystery was intriguing. At every turn, you're never sure who Hessa should trust, what the truth is, or what's actually happening, and with Eang becoming more and more difficult to get ahold of, Hessa is lost at sea. It became really gripping, the more questions that crop up, the few answers we get. 

I have to say I loved the worldbuilding. It's a very intriguing world, with gods that are very much a part of their worshipers' lives, and I was reminded of Greek mythology, as the ew gods had defeated the old gods, and were now in power, much like the Greek gods fighting the Titans. But there are secrets and lies and things kept hidden, and not everything is as it seems. There are so many layers, and they unfold layer by layer as the story progresses. I was desperate to know what the truth was of this world, of the people, and it's history.

So for the most part, I enjoyed Hall of Smoke. I was intrigued and gripped, and loved how quickly it moved, never letting the story lull. But I never really cared about any of the characters. While this book has a conclusion, and we get all the answers, there is meant to be a sequel, and I'd definitely be up for reading it, so that shows you how my feelings changed towards the book. But I definitely feel like the beginning could use some work, and give the reader some time to get emotionally involved, because I still never really cared about the characters. Hall of Smoke is overall enjoyable, but it could definitely have been better. 
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