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The Beta: Part Two by Avanne Michaels

elinsophie's review

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adventurous emotional medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes

4.0

autumnwitch14's review

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dark emotional tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0


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livingthrupages's review

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Idek how to justify myself on how did I get this far on reading this series but mayb because I was hoping for an intense grovelling and huge character development. The writing alienated itself from the conflicts surrounding the books. I never felt hollow reading an OV than this one. It is alr a given that OV is has a strong patriarchal system but I never expected it to be handled this poorly on this series. It's not even about the designation anymore , it just feels like the FMC was diminished because she is a woman. This should just be exclusively MMMMM theme just analyzing where the focus of this book is reeling into which is on the omega. What's triggering is the fact that the FMC blieved that she is totally nothing important and would just blindly off herself just to protect the omega. I've read a lot of OV but on this universe I can only say that this could have been handled better. But time and time again it proves that men lacks empathy to what women are going through even in fictional world.

kassiebetweenpages's review against another edition

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5.0

With the way Talia was left in book one, I have never ran so fast to a second book in a series so fast!
again, this has some heavy TW's so please do your own research and stay safe friends.

The way I wanted the entire world to grovel at Talia's feet for the trauma and treatment she had to endure all on her own. and gahhhh if ever I could reach through a book and take a character's life it would be Devons 100% for his continued mess ups and downplaying of what she endured not only for Jasper but the pack as well. Jasper wanted to be there as soon as Talia woke up in the hospital and it crushed my heart that she still felt the need to try and not come in between his pack and him...I was like "bestie what about you, what about what you need!"

I would have loved to see more trauma healing withing the book because our fmc really did go through a lot but that didn't spot me from loving this book. also I would like to state that I do not care is Seth would have sacrificed his whole ass life for Talia I still wouldn't forgive that sack of rotten man meat.

qtrangdo's review

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5.0

RH/strong FMC/bully

heather_reads_romance's review

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4.0

part 2

I love, love, loved watching the pack grow closer in this book. They had a bunch of obstacles to overcome and it allowed them to bond more than they already had. I love all the different personalities of the group and how they all fit together.

jordyrae's review

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adventurous dark fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.25

diquinn's review

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challenging dark tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0

This series gets better as it goes on. I'm hesitant to even read the 3rd one cause I don't want to leave this world. 

kassiebetweenpages's review

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challenging dark emotional sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

5.0

With the way Talia was left in book one, I have never ran so fast to a second book in a series so fast!
again, this has some heavy TW's so please do your own research and stay safe friends.

The way I wanted the entire world to grovel at Talia's feet for the trauma and treatment she had to endure all on her own. and gahhhh if ever I could reach through a book and take a character's life it would be Devons 100% for his continued mess ups and downplaying of what she endured not only for Jasper but the pack as well. Jasper wanted to be there as soon as Talia woke up in the hospital and it crushed my heart that she still felt the need to try and not come in between his pack and him...I was like "bestie what about you, what about what you need!"

I would have loved to see more trauma healing withing the book because our fmc really did go through a lot but that didn't spot me from loving this book. also I would like to state that I do not care is Seth would have sacrificed his whole ass life for Talia I still wouldn't forgive that sack of rotten man meat.