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Fugitive

Lauren DeStefano

3.59 AVERAGE


This sequel to "Wither" was not promising at the beginning, picked up in the middle, and then spiraled right past awful towards the end. DeStefano seems to confuse repeating-herself with thoughtful-character-development as Rhine rearticulates the same ideas, expressions, and behaviour time and again. Another middle-book in a trilogy that is on a journey to nowhere.

Gabriel! Oh my goodness you're just all alone in this big old foreign place. Where is Rhine when you need her? Oh yeah, in Vaughn's torture chamber he calls a basement being prodded and experimented on. He must think the world is such a terrible place! First the Circus thing and then her destroyed house. He probably wanted to go back to working as a slave in Vaughn's house. At least it was warm there.

This review is originally posted at The Fiction Pixie.

In a world of devastation, Rhine and Gabriel have journeyed out to face the terrors with no plan and no resources. Danger seems to lurk at every turn while the invisible dangers of starvation, sickness, poverty and more rack our young survivors. This book didn't not fit into the same mold that its predecessor, Wither, had set. Previously, Wither had a very rigid setting and it was a unique approach for a setting of such a desolate world; this book however, was an open world. A world that allowed Rhine and Gabriel complete exploration of its depravity and desolation.

I went into this book expecting the terrors of the carnival to be a persistent problem. The cover eludes that it will be a significant part of the story and even the synopsis sets up that same expectation. With that in mind, the plot of this book fell a little short; I feel like this may be common in terms of a trilogy's middle read. The creepiness and haunting experience of the carnival was limited and extinguished early and set up for only a few major plot points following its end. It left this book feeling oddly paced and hopeless.

The characters made up for a wavering experience because in this book we get an intense look at Gabriel and his love for Rhine. Gabriel's love is different from the shallow, naive love that we saw from Linden in the first book and it really grows into major focus and safe harbor for Rhine. Rhine on the other hand doesn't grow and expand in this book the way a hard-knocked survivor would. I think that is accomplished through the overtone this book starts early on with intense yet unintended drug use. It inhibits Rhine from really becoming a thoughtful character that would perhaps have had the opportunity to devise plans and concentrate on truly surviving.

The villain of this book, House Master Vaughn, is incredibly well crafted and has a haunting and invisible tie that leaves Rhine and the reader increasingly terrified that he is lurking and watching every move she makes. It is a thrilling twist to really understand how twisted and determined he is without the use of common means such as guns and violence; his presence is always surrounding the escapees even if he is not.

Though this book was languid in its pacing and climax, it brought out a lot of characteristics about the characters that pull the reader in and leave us wondering where we will find ourselves and our little heroes in book three.

Really, I just couldn't put it down. From the moment Rhine and Gabriel are out of the water, it is one scary situation after another. Fever is an apt title.

I had very mixed feelings about Wither, so I was a bit hesitant approaching its sequel, Fever. However, I ended up liking this one more than its predecessor (although not without some reservations still.)

Characters:

Rhine: I'd had trouble connecting with her in the first book, but I suppose I must have acclimatized to her voice, because in Fever it didn't cause me the same difficulty. She's still distant in a way, and overly dramatic at times, but by then I was used to it and just recognized it as Rhine's unique tone. Rhine's impulsivity and acting without thinking haven't changed from the first book either, and it lands her in some pretty sticky situations.

Gabriel: he still didn't do much for me in this one. Sure, he's a nice guy and very devoted to Rhine (kind of blindly, actually), but he just doesn't impress me. In the end, I can basically take him or leave him and not really care either way.

Cecily: in contrast to Gabriel, I find her character fascinating. She presents an innocent facade, but she's very crafty and entirely underestimated by everyone. Cecily's trying to help both sides and most of all make sure that she and her baby are safe and taken care of. I think she does care about Rhine, but she wants to help in a way that doesn't jeopardize her own relationship with Linden. Make no doubt about this: Cecily is looking out for number one. I enjoyed seeing Rhine realize that she can't count on Cecily's loyalty.

Linden: where are you in this one??? The brief glimpses we get just aren't enough. Yet the few interactions we do see between Rhine and him are certainly illuminating, exposing truths that need to be aired. Linden is right on the mark when he states that the relationship he has with each wife is completely different in nature, demonstrating an insightful grasp of the situation. All in all, I think Rhine could stand to learn a thing or two from Linden, rather than dismissing him as a puppet controlled by his father. It's true, he has been rather wilfully blind, choosing to believe whatever Vaughn tells him, but I think the next book will provide the opportunity for him to prove himself (should he rise to the challenge). In some ways he's still like a child; I think he has the potential to do a lot of good if he can gather up the courage to stand against his father and society's expectations.

New characters: many of the new characters we're introduced to are distinctly drawn, and I enjoyed meeting some fresh faces. Madame was horrid, very unlikeable but certainly more interesting than Vaughn. She's extremely selfish, mercenary and ruthless, and her brand of "evil" feels a bit more real than Vaughn's does. Madame is just in it for herself, to make money, and that simple motivation gives rise to a character who really makes herself present on the page.

Maddie, in complete contrast to Madame, provided a younger, "child" character which gave Rhine a chance for her motherly instincts to develop, and a chance for her to care for someone. Maddie's smart but wary and timid, her personality and reactions really reflecting the dystopian world DeStefano has created.

Plot/premise:

While I didn't feel like Rhine really made significant advances in this book (in terms of getting closer to reaching her goals), at least she moved around more than in Wither. I enjoyed being exposed to some different settings in this world and meeting new characters. The abandoned carnival was a really interesting backdrop for part of the story — sort of like a microcosm of society. I'm hoping the characters from the carnival appear again in book 3.

I really enjoyed the twist involving Rhine's symptoms of illness (
Spoiler I liked that the June beans from book 1 were tied in
). However, overall I had difficulty swallowing some of the scientific explanations for what's happening. They come across as lacking a solid knowledge foundation about concepts of illness, with words like "chemical dependency" and "bacterial resistance" getting thrown around haphazardly and without making much sense. (What do bacteria have to do with, anyway? The whole premise of this world is founded on a VIRUS.) I still have a lot of questions about Vaughn's reasoning behind his experiments as well as the specific methods he uses.
Spoiler I still don't fully understand how the June beans were being used by Vaughn. To build up Rhine's immunity to the virus? If so, why would they be addictive? And how can you administer replicated symptoms of a virus to someone anyhow?? Symptoms are external signs of disease. You can inject someone with something that causes symptoms, but not with the signs themselves.


Also, there's one revelation towards the end which, while in line with standard dystopian fiction, is rather unoriginal and convenient. Furthermore, it makes the reader question the events of Fever in retrospect and wonder how they could possibly have happened given this new piece of information. (
Spoiler If Vaughn had implanted Rhine with a tracker, why did it take him SO LONG to capture her again?
)

The action is concentrated more in the first part of the book, and then slows down in the second. Unfortunately I think Fever does suffer from "middle book syndrome" a bit, in lacking direction and a internal story arc that hangs together. By the end you may feel like most of what happened was pointless, and that the book is merely serving as a stepping stone to the final one in the trilogy. But the very last page is a good one, providing a hook that sets up perfectly for the third book.

Writing style: If you liked the writing style in Wither, you'll probably like it in Fever as well. Even if you didn't particularly like the writing style of Wither, you might find, as I did, that you become used to it. Rhine maintains the same voice, and the carnival setting in particular comes to life with DeStefano's description.

Final verdict: 3.5 shooting stars. Intriguing characters, but the scientific impracticalities annoyed me. Although I still have too many criticisms to bump it to 4 stars, I did prefer it to Wither.

Disclaimer: I received this book as an ARC from the publisher for review.

This one was not as good as the first one but she needs to demand for her brother to Linden who would do anything for her. Even if she thinks the Father-inlaw is bad, it's better than her brother being in the streets angry and lost looking for his sister than being with her where he is fed and so what if he experiments on them. People don't mind and what if her brother doesn't mind. I would demand for my brother if I was her. I would tell Linden that I want my twin brother. I was him or I'll keep saying bad things about his father until I have my brother with me safe and sound breathing with not a scratch on his body. I love my brother and even if I would have to sacrifice my comfort so it will be better for him I would risk it.

The writing in this sequel is still fantastic, but the story is a bit more brutal than in the first book.

Actual Rating: 3.5

Ok, so this book is hard for me to rate. The end of the first chapter was so promising. It was intense and I was ready for some really crazy stuff to happen. Rhine and Gabriel have escaped from the mansion and are trying to return to New York so that Rhine can find her brother. It was so thrilling that they were finally free and then it seemed like the pace of the story just slowed down. They find themselves caught by a woman who runs a carnival, which was basically a brothel. While it was creepy, and some awful things transpire, it left me wanting more. The escape from the carnival was exciting, but then once again things slowed down.

However, the last 60 pages were great!!! If the entire book was like the last 60 pages, it would have definitely gotten a higher rating. It gave me more of what I was expecting and wanting from this series. It had a huge creep factor and ended on a wonderful cliffhanger!!! It is leaving me excited to see how everything will come together in the end.

Overall, this book was ok, the last 60pgs make it all worth it. I still really enjoy the writing style and I am very intrigued by the world that Lauren DeStefano has created.

I read this back to back like i did the first, whilst i was ill and im obsessed with this world. I would however say that out of the three books this is my least favourite not that that means much as i loved them all

It was a little hard to get into at first, but I had no problem finishing it! And of course, it leaves you wanting for more.