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4.0
Change in POV, still gripping . . . but . . .
I won’t say anything about the characters or plot, only that the POV shifts from Leiel and Cleod to Kilras. This is his story. The pace and character development are excellent. Each vignette builds our knowledge of Kilras and Arnan beautifully. Thoroughly engrossing.
But . . .
The number of mistakes (typos, missing words, etc.) is appalling. The proofreaders, copyeditors, editor, and author should be mortified with how many there are. All of them were readily apparent as they all broke the flow of the prose.
I won’t say anything about the characters or plot, only that the POV shifts from Leiel and Cleod to Kilras. This is his story. The pace and character development are excellent. Each vignette builds our knowledge of Kilras and Arnan beautifully. Thoroughly engrossing.
But . . .
The number of mistakes (typos, missing words, etc.) is appalling. The proofreaders, copyeditors, editor, and author should be mortified with how many there are. All of them were readily apparent as they all broke the flow of the prose.
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