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Willful Machines by Tim Floreen

lunarchfey's review against another edition

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3.0

3/5 stars

Equal parts romance and sci-fi thriller, Willful Machines is the story of the closeted son of the US president unraveling an elaborate plot involving robots & artificial intelligence... while also falling in love with the new boy at school. (And I think you can see where this is going, but I'm not going to outright spoil it for you).

I really wanted to love this book more than I did! In the end, I wouldn't discourage anybody from reading it (especially if you really want your queer robot romance fix), but it was more wistful thinking than satisfying substance. Although it's YA, it reads on the younger side, and the prose was a bit 'clunky.' I did feel some fondness for the characters, but the romance was very love-at-first sight and happened very quickly: the pacing and characterization would have been better-served and more believable with more build-up.

In the end, I wanted to read a story about what this book was about (robots and robot feelings, queer romance, robot-building nerds, a diverse cast, a complicated thriller mystery storyline, copious Shakespeare references) but the book itself wasn't what I wanted it to be.

nyeran's review

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4.0

- “Who are you? Where’s your normal, healthy, paralyzing teenage insecurity?
- “Probably trumped by my Latin American audacity.

4 stelle perchè sì. 4 stelle piene anche con l’instalove che poi non è instalove ma poi lo è, ma poi forse no, ma poi forse lo è un pochino, ma forse poi lo è per davvero. Insomma, 4 stelle. 4 stelle abbondanti perchè oh, mi è piaciuto. 

♠ Non è perfetto certo, ma il suo lavoro lo fà più che bene. Mettiamo un attimo da parte la storia e i personaggi, chiediamoci anche noi cosa significa essere umani. Se esistesse un intelligenza artificiale cosa la distinguerebbe da noi? Il libero arbitrio? Ma il libero arbitrio esiste davvero, ed è davvero LIBERO? O siamo anche noi condizionati nelle nostre scelte dall’ambiente e dalle persone che ci circondano, dalle aspettative altrui e dallo status quo? In quel caso noi e le macchine saremmo così diversi? Non siamo anche noi in un certo senso programmati per fare determinate scelte? E fino a che punto una macchina può essere programmata? C’è la possibilità che usufruiscano anche loro del libero arbitrio?
Ecco, questo è uno di quei rari libri dove si sente davvero il bisogno di fermarsi un attimo e porsi delle domande. 

♠ Queste domande se le pone anche Lee, il protagonista di questa storia ambientata in un futuro non molto lontano, dove la scienza robotica ha fatto passi da gigante ed è riuscita a creare i 2B, robot che assomigliano in tutto e per tutto agli esseri umani o agli animali e che si comportano come tali. 7 anni prima Charlotte, il primo prototipo di 2B, è scappata dal laboratorio e ha nascosto la sua mente in internet e da allora, mentre gli umani cercando di arginare il problema creando delle leggi proteggi-umani, (pensate ad Hitler e alle leggi razziali), lei ha messo a punto un piano per far si che ai 2B venga riconosciuta l’esistenza legale.

♠ Cosa mi è piaciuto… I protagonisti, tanto per cominciare, nonostante l’instalove. Ho apprezzato molto che la sessualità di Lee sia un tassello importante della trama ma che non la definisca, si Lee è gay ma è anche depresso e in passato ha tentato di suicidarsi, direi che stò poveretto ha problemi ben più grossi dell’essere attratto dai ragazzi.
Nico beh, lui è come dovrebbero essere tutti gli interessi amorosi, il suo aspetto è nella media –ha i denti storti santocielo- non ha occhi di colori improbabili, è gentile, cita shakespeare per le sue pickup lines, non fà mai il saccente o l’iper-protettivo e sopratutto... non è bipolare. Qui vorrei una standing ovation, grazie. È pur vero che forse non lo è semplicemente perchè non ha il tempo materiale per esserlo, nel senso che nel giro di 3/4 giorni, che è il periodo di sviluppo della storia, non è che abbia proprio tutto il tempo del mondo per essere idiota quindi...Good for you, Nico! I due insieme poi sono a dir poco adorabili ma come ho gia detto, puzza parecchio di instalove e quindi meh, avrei preferito un po’ più di lentezza ma chiaramente in uno stand alone era un po’ improbabile. 

♠ Il world building è del tutto inesistente visto che la storia si svolge in una scuola/maniero piazzata in cima ad una cascata (??) e in luoghi chiusi come stanze, caverne e miniere. Quel poco però è ottimamente descritto sia al livello visivo che uditivo, si riesce quasi a sentire il rumore dell’acqua che cade dalla cascata. Avrei preferito un po’ più di background per i robot, quando hanno iniziato ad essere così be sviluppati per esempio, che tipo di tecnologie ci sono nelle città e nella vita quotidiana, ho apprezzato molto che l’autore abbia sviluppato la storia con delle basi più che credibili al livello politico ed etico, mi ha ricordato molto anche gli X-Men.

♠ Charlotte mi ha convinta molto, sopratutto considerando che non si vede mai, è solo la sua presenza astratta che incute timore, il sapere quello che è in grado di fare, il sapere che nessuno è al sicuro perchè è lei è li fuori. Lei è intrigante e sopratutto non si fà odiare mai fino alla fine perchè ci si rende conto che anche lei si pone le nostre stesse domande. È solo una macchina che ubbidisce al suo creatore o è qualcosa di più? È libera o può diventarlo?

♠ Però ci sono troppi plot twist. Charlotte fà attacchi terroristici, poi però si scopre che Charlotte si è suicidata 7 anni prim, poi si scopre che uno scienziato si finge Charlotte, poi scopriamo che no, è il preside della scuola a fingersi Charlotte. Tutti questi plot twist alla fine del libro con il risultato che la fine è risultata un po’ incompleta, sei nel vortice formato da queste scoperte e poi giri pagina e ti ritrovi con un finale aperto. Forse è un messaggio? Tim, hai lasciato il finale aperto perchè scriverai un sequel? 

allysonbogie's review against another edition

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4.0

After I finished this book, I saw Tim Floreen speak on a panel. He said he hoped that librarians would give this book to kids who were simply looking for a good book, rather than only giving it to gay kids. And that is exactly what I am going to do (once I get it into my library). Lee, the main character, is a "walking walk-in" as his best friend calls him. He is closeted, and happens to be the son of the U.S. President. Although his romance is a significant plot driver, the book isn't about him being gay. It's about what can happen when artificial intelligence goes beyond what we've ever seen before, into the realm of machines having will and free agency. It also delves into some existential questions that I think will appeal to teens.

It's fast-paced, and the setting is very vivid, both traits that I enjoy in YA novels. If anything, it made me too tense and I raced through it because I was impatient to find out what would happen.

I really enjoyed it, and highly recommend it if you like futuristic or dystopian stories.

marley's review against another edition

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3.0

World where robots and humans are getting to be on equal footing? Check. A cute romance between a introvert and a boy with a heart of gold? Check. An interesting antagonist? Check. Willful Machines is definitely a solid addition to the science fiction end of the Young Adult age range.

What I liked:

-Charlotte was a brilliant main antagonist. I feel like her motivations were very solid, and it wasn't a simple matter of right and wrong.
-Gremlin! I think Gremlin was 1) completely and utterly adorable, and 2) a significant part of one of the most sweet moments between Nico and Lee;
-The layering in the plot: there were a lot of reveals, some of which where fairly obvious going off textual evidence, and some which really shifted the entire perspective of the plot;

What I wasn't such a fan of:

-There were some insensitive bits in the text that I was surprised slipped through the editing process, namely the part where Lee was describing how racially ambiguous Nico was;
-The climax didn't really end? It just kind of dissipated, so the ending was quite unsatisfying
-The romance was quite fast in developing, especially given the time frame of the book
-The last plot twist made no sense to me at all. I can't say more without spoiling it but ugh.

The verdict: A twisty, faced paced read that definitely kept me hooked and had its moments. Would read a sequel if there were to be one.

justwanna2read's review

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adventurous mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.25

dr_logen's review

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2.0

Everything about this book was just okay. The characters weren't awful, but they were forgettable. The world building was almost believable, but just not that interesting. There was nothing horrible or offensive about this book, but there was just nothing really good either. Honestly, this book was so meh that I really can't think of anything else negative or positive to write about it. :/

bluebasuar's review

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4.0

3.5/5 stars
apparantly this doesn't have a sequel?? it totally needs a sequel

I really enjoyed the plot and characters in this book, and I loved the discussion of grief, humanity, free will, and mental illness. despite the slight instalove, I really loved the main romance, and how it tied into the central plot, and the discussion about what defines humanity. However, I definitely feel like this book needs a sequel, as the plot felt unfinished, with a lot of questions left unanswered, and the themes could have been discussed more.

daffz's review

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4.0

There were a few reasons why I really liked Willful Machines, gay character? Check. Robots? Check. Discussions about the ability of robots to have real and genuine feelings? Check. School setting? Check.

But besides all those things that I really enjoy, it was also just a good story. It was well constructed and flowed nicely, the pacing was great and I never felt bored while reading it. I enjoyed Lee as a main character a lot, and Nico was adorable as well. The author did a good job of dropping hints during the story that would come back into play later, which made for a joyful experience when I caught one and turned out to be right about it.

I took off a star because there were a few things about the ending I didn't love, but for the most part i really enjoyed this book. It's a stand alone, and while I could see it having a sequel with the way it ended, I feel like it works on its own too.

mys_librarian's review

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4.0

Fast paced, action packed sci-fi with a star-crossed romance sub plot! Yum!

bluebeereads's review

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4.0


Istyria book blog ~ B's world of enchanted books

Well geesh... What is with that ending? Seriously... I was feeling all the feels and loving it a lot and then it ends and it doesn't feel complete yet. There better be more. A sequel, follow-up,... anything. Because the story isn't over yet. But I did love this.

In the near future an Artificial Intelligence named Charlotte has gone rogue, terrorizing the country. Everyone's on high alert, except President's son Lee Fisher. He has other things to worry about, like keeping his Security, dad and the rest of the world from knowing he's gay. His crush on the new boy in school, Nico, isn't helping with that. But then the attacks start happening at school and Lee seems to be the next target.

This book has something very few non-contemporary books have. An LGBT romance. Honestly, I haven't seen that before. Not for the main character anyway. It's quite refreshing and it's what drew me to the book when I first came across it on Edelweiss. Next to that, the story itself was very good too. I was hooked the whole time, read it in one sitting, nail-biting throughout the last 100 or so pages. I flew through the pages way too fast.

But then it ended and the story doesn't feel complete yet. Which is why this book isn't rated higher, that and something else I'll tell in a bit. BUT, and I've never said this before, should a sequel of some kind be confirmed, so I know the story will be continued, I have no problem making the rating 4.5 stars. I'm writing this review in May, so it may have changed by the time you read this. If so, feel free to let me know in the comments! Next to that I feel like I could've used a bit more info on what the different tech-y things were. Like the Spiders and stuff.

I really loved the characters in this book. All of them. Dr. Singh, Ray, Trumbull, Lee's dad, ... They were all great. I loved Bex, Lee's best friend. She's such a great friend and she's feisty. I want to see more of her! But of course I love Lee and Nico the most. I can't say too much about Nico because that would be spoiler territory, but he was great and I loved him. Lee was such a sweet main character. I felt so much for him, my heart ached for him. Their romance is super sweet and works very well with the story. So good, you guys!

Willful Machines is a very entertaining, nail-biting and surprisingly original book with a very sweet LGBT romance that blends perfectly with the overall story. Recommended to fans of Sci-Fi or Dystopian and want something new in the genre.

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