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[b:Love and War Part 1|24022199|Love and War Part 1 (The Underworld Coven #1)|Kim Faulks|https://images.gr-assets.com/books/1419316046s/24022199.jpg|43620956] by [a:Kim Faulks|5146788|Kim Faulks|https://images.gr-assets.com/authors/1363835377p2/5146788.jpg]
Genres: Book Rejected
1.75 Stars (That's me being nice)
I have so many problems with this story and every story I have read by Kim Faulks.
In fact, I have 2 more of her books on my kindle that I will be deleting without reading them.
Numerous typos and editing errors.
Jumpy and incoherent scenes.
Improper dialogue editing, punctuation and so much more.
I kept trying to read them and find one I really liked because each showed potential for a great story teller.
Unfortunately, none of them showed any improvement.
I gave this one 2 stars because it is not the absolute worse I have read of hers.
The best was 'Bitten: Nova' and I gave it 3 stars by overlooking some of the problems that existed in the story. I plan on editing that review and rating it more accurately.
Genres: Book Rejected
1.75 Stars (That's me being nice)
I have so many problems with this story and every story I have read by Kim Faulks.
In fact, I have 2 more of her books on my kindle that I will be deleting without reading them.
Numerous typos and editing errors.
Jumpy and incoherent scenes.
Improper dialogue editing, punctuation and so much more.
I kept trying to read them and find one I really liked because each showed potential for a great story teller.
Unfortunately, none of them showed any improvement.
I gave this one 2 stars because it is not the absolute worse I have read of hers.
The best was 'Bitten: Nova' and I gave it 3 stars by overlooking some of the problems that existed in the story. I plan on editing that review and rating it more accurately.
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