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kerrisa 's review for:
The Monster
by L.J. Shen
Three stars purely because it ended better than it started. It needed significant editing and spelling corrections before publishing, which I didn’t bother dinging a star for because that may be fixed later.
But good lord I couldn’t STAND these two. Short and sweet with no spoilers: she’s a naive moron from a billionaire family, he’s a cynical mobster from a poor background (monster, hah, super funny play on words there…). Their families are tied together through multiple layers, none of which make any sense seeing as how she’s filthy rich and he’s the mob.
Some of the plot literally makes no sense. Wanted by the law? Shhh not an issue. Angry vendettas all over the map with minimal proof of anything? Shhh not an issue.
I had it at 4 stars when I started writing this…I guess it really did bother me how not great it was.
But good lord I couldn’t STAND these two. Short and sweet with no spoilers: she’s a naive moron from a billionaire family, he’s a cynical mobster from a poor background (monster, hah, super funny play on words there…). Their families are tied together through multiple layers, none of which make any sense seeing as how she’s filthy rich and he’s the mob.
Some of the plot literally makes no sense. Wanted by the law? Shhh not an issue. Angry vendettas all over the map with minimal proof of anything? Shhh not an issue.
I had it at 4 stars when I started writing this…I guess it really did bother me how not great it was.