bookishvistareads 's review for:

Detonate by Luna Mason

2.0

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tbh i had a lot more hope for this book because i loved the first one so much. the characters in this one were still great and i liked their chemistry. it is as more the timeline and storytelling i didn’t like. it felt very rushed and kind of all over and just kept taking me out of the story because of that. plus the big *peak* seemed random and didn’t make much sense story wise. like i wasn’t really ever worried for mfc and it was this odd feeling of “i think you want the reader worried like the mmc is but maybe you only want the mmc worried idk”. i am still going to read the third book when it comes out but hoping it’s better