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A review by jkneebone
The Golden Enclaves by Naomi Novik
challenging
dark
inspiring
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
In this final book of The Scholomance, El & co have made it through graduation - and now have to face the problems that face their larger world: enclaves collapsing, power struggles, and the questionable motivations of those in power.
It is challenging to write a good series conclusion, let alone a conclusion in which your characters are outside of the very specific physical location-slash-minor character that has dominated the first two books, and I think Naomi Novik does a pretty freaking good job of it. While I did have a few gripes, it still kept me so enraptured and emotionally invested that, at various major reveal points, I had to put the book down and walk around to calm down.
My gripes were mainly with the pacing, and with how little of the side characters we get in the front half of this book. I totally understand El’s emotional and mental state after “graduating” - in fact I really liked that in this book, it was made more explicit just how traumatizing and prison-like the Scholomance was, as if only now being free of it can El let herself think about that - however I personally would have liked it if the plot had moved along a bit quicker. Similarly, although I find Liesel hilarious, I was really missing the crew from the first two books, especially Aadhya and Liu! Luckily that was rectified in the later half, but I still would have liked a bit more time with the side characters.We don’t even hear about Chloe after El leaves New York!
What makes me not care about that, though, and what makes this a 5-star series in my opinion, is the sheer level of planning that Novik has clearly put into this series from the very beginning, all of which pays off in The Golden Enclaves. The world building is tight; there were no plot holes. So many pieces of information that seemed insignificant or merely descriptive in books 1 and 2 suddenly make perfect sense. I literally had a “holy shit” moment while driving as a bunch of pieces fell into place, and a few chapters later my hunch was confirmed. Spoilers about foreshadowing:Seriously, think about it - one of the first things we find out about mals is just how bad maw-mouths are. I think El described within the first few chapters of book 1 what happened to her dad. From the beginning, we’ve understood that even in this world of monsters upon monsters, getting taken by a maw-mouth is THE WORST THING that can happen to you…so when we find out that enclaves create maw-mouths (and don’t forget that El’s disdain for enclaves is also established pretty fucking early) it is just as horrifying to the reader as it is to El. In literally chapter one of <I>A Deadly Education</i> El describes the year that only 12 maleficers graduated and quips that Orion was probably conceived around the same time. There’s the joke Aadhya makes also in book one about how Orion doesn’t recognize her without El, like his brain is saying “I’m being bad at being human” - which he is, obviously, and now we know why!
This whole series is just good. I’m thrilled that book 3 lived up to the first two; I was absolutely floored by all the clever foreshadowing and the way everything was clearly planned out. And most of all I adore the philosophical message - how El always tries to do the right thing, to choose the path of least harm, and how apt her observations are about her fellow wizards. So many times she forces herself to realize that even people she dislikes can be cared for by others, can have value; that even people who have benefitted off of pain and suffering in the past don’t deserve to have more suffering delivered unto them, especially if they didn’t know about it. I think El’s morals got (understandably) a bit more nuanced in this book, but I loved that at her heart she is still always her mother’s daughter, always trying to do good.
I loved this series SO MUCH. I’m torn between an immediate reread and lending the books to a friend right away so I have someone to discuss it with. This is why Naomi Novik is one of my all-time favorite authors.
It is challenging to write a good series conclusion, let alone a conclusion in which your characters are outside of the very specific physical location-slash-minor character that has dominated the first two books, and I think Naomi Novik does a pretty freaking good job of it. While I did have a few gripes, it still kept me so enraptured and emotionally invested that, at various major reveal points, I had to put the book down and walk around to calm down.
My gripes were mainly with the pacing, and with how little of the side characters we get in the front half of this book. I totally understand El’s emotional and mental state after “graduating” - in fact I really liked that in this book, it was made more explicit just how traumatizing and prison-like the Scholomance was, as if only now being free of it can El let herself think about that - however I personally would have liked it if the plot had moved along a bit quicker. Similarly, although I find Liesel hilarious, I was really missing the crew from the first two books, especially Aadhya and Liu! Luckily that was rectified in the later half, but I still would have liked a bit more time with the side characters.
What makes me not care about that, though, and what makes this a 5-star series in my opinion, is the sheer level of planning that Novik has clearly put into this series from the very beginning, all of which pays off in The Golden Enclaves. The world building is tight; there were no plot holes. So many pieces of information that seemed insignificant or merely descriptive in books 1 and 2 suddenly make perfect sense. I literally had a “holy shit” moment while driving as a bunch of pieces fell into place, and a few chapters later my hunch was confirmed. Spoilers about foreshadowing:
This whole series is just good. I’m thrilled that book 3 lived up to the first two; I was absolutely floored by all the clever foreshadowing and the way everything was clearly planned out. And most of all I adore the philosophical message - how El always tries to do the right thing, to choose the path of least harm, and how apt her observations are about her fellow wizards. So many times she forces herself to realize that even people she dislikes can be cared for by others, can have value; that even people who have benefitted off of pain and suffering in the past don’t deserve to have more suffering delivered unto them, especially if they didn’t know about it. I think El’s morals got (understandably) a bit more nuanced in this book, but I loved that at her heart she is still always her mother’s daughter, always trying to do good.
I loved this series SO MUCH. I’m torn between an immediate reread and lending the books to a friend right away so I have someone to discuss it with. This is why Naomi Novik is one of my all-time favorite authors.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death and Violence
Moderate: Sexual content