A review by meredith_williams_
The Unfortunate Side Effects of Heartbreak and Magic by Breanne Randall

dark emotional mysterious medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

1.5

This was potentially the biggest let down of a book I’ve read in a long time. It was marketed as a Practical Magic-type witchy romance, and for the first 20% of the book, it was delivering on that promise. However, the story takes a sharp left turn and the whole book ended up being a very difficult read. For starters, the characterization and setting seemed at odds with one another. Why was the grandmother constantly using southern phrases, going to a baptist church, and cooking with butter and shortening all for them to be living in…Southern California? Secondly, the pacing was off and the ending felt rushed and undone. There were major characters that came into the story at the last minute and had no conclusion whatsoever. Thirdly, the romance was lacking and became a subplot by the end of the book. The main character’s love interest was problematic, to say the least!
The fact that I was expected to root for the two of them after he revealed that he was ENGAGED WITH A BABY ON THE WAY was absolutely wild! But not as wild as the fact that his fiancé was FAKING THE PREGNANCY or that the FMC was totally fine with TAKING HIM BACK after all of that!!!

Additionally, the undertones were weirdly conservative? There was a lot of missionary white-savior rhetoric, a lot of churchy language, a lot of overly generalized and stereotypical portrayals of people of color, and a literal mention of Young Living Essential Oils. 🙃 Lastly, you could tell the author was trying to speak positively about therapy and mental health, but that was immediately cancelled out by her portrayal of one of the characters trying to take their own life and following that scene up with another character casually brushing it off by saying, “We all have our dark days.” 🥴
All in all, I would not waste your time on this book!!
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