A review by arensb
Apex Magazine Issue 50 by Lynne M. Thomas

3.0

The prose poem aspect of this story—telling the story in impressions and imagery, rather than ordinary descriptive sentences–is effective, though not really my cup of tea. It‘s as if the action is happening in the corner of the narrator’s eye.

The story takes a sudden turn into left field about two-thirds of the way through, from
Spoilerbringing dinosaurs back to life through genetic engineering
to
Spoilerthe narrator’s fiancé being beaten up by bigots
, and it’s not immediately obvious how the two are connected, but upon reflection, I think it works
Spoiler(if the fiancé’s work had been successful, the narrator could have sicced a dinosaurs on the ones who hurt the one she loves)
.

Aside: I see a lot of people complaining that this isn’t science fiction. Yeah, it is. If nothing else, there’s the whole
Spoiler“reverse-genetic-engineering dinosaurs”
aspect. As far as I can tell, the complaints seem to be “this story doesn’t conform to what I expect from science-fiction”. It comes across as “it doesn’t have spaceships or time travelers or bug-eyed monsters, so it’s crap.” I don't remember anyone hating on Mike Resnick’s “One Perfect Morning, With Jackals”, despite it having even less of an SF element, as I recall.

Three stars because, as I said above, poetry isn’t my cup of tea.