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ohio_enthusiast 's review for:
Retrograde
by Peter Cawdron
mysterious
reflective
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Plot
Strong character development:
No
Loveable characters:
No
Flaws of characters a main focus:
No
Writing often goes on tangents (from introducing characters, through describing scenes or technology to lengthy flashbacks) in the middle of the action. This can be a sentence, a paragraph or several pages long. I found it jarring, breaking immersion and interfering with the plot without adding anything substantial. Half way through the book I started skipping those tangents and didn't feel like I missed anything.