A review by drez80
Finding North by Carmen Jenner

3.0

This was a little long, and I didn't really feel the chemistry between the MCs. I feel like they were just together because they never got closure for what happened when they were younger. Also, they didn't communicate. They really needed to sit down and talk about what happened previously and work that all out before becoming a couple and having a real relationship. They'd get jealous but they'd just fall into bed to fix it and never discuss it. But they weren't really in a relationship, so no one had the right to be mad. That was just aggravating for me as the reader. And for the love of God could North find a pair and admit he's gay already?! That dragged out far too long. The other thing that bothered me where the flashbacks. This is purely preference, but I'd rather get the whole backstory at the beginning of the end, not in flashbacks in bits and pieces. There was always something indicating that it was a flashback, but there was never anything saying you were back to the present. You just had to start reading to figure it out. Overall it was a decent story, but I could have done with it being shorter and less mis/non-communication.