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fulltimebookish 's review for:
War Hour
by Lauren Loscig
2.5 I had a hard time finishing this book. The story has so much potential and I believe it has a reader out there, it just wasn't for me. The concept was really interesting and there were amazing ideas. Very YA in nature, but for me the prose was lacking substantially and the pacing needed a lot of finessing. What it needed was an editor and some experienced Beta readers. There were several glaring plot holes and a lot of... Where did that person go? And why are we now just trusting everyone? I wish Lauren the best of luck, and good things to come! I think she has HUGE potential to be a fantastic author, her ideas were very cool.