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A review by girasoldelluvia
Receiver of Many by Rachel Alexander
1.0
I usually refrain from rating a book I didn't finish because I want to have the full picture and I don't think it's fair, but clearly, I read a different book from the other 90% of the population.
Obviously, it's not the book for me. If the eons-old Persephone acting like a 12-year-old for half the book; the sex scene (first time of the "heroine") happening during an actual descent to hell in a moving chariot with the hero on his feet, one hand holding the reins, the other one simultaneously holding Persephone to him, stroking her hair, undressing himself, and covering her with his arms; the instant-love; the claiming of a baby as the love interest by a very old god; and the spying on a couple having sex didn't clue me in, the change of pov from one sentence to the next (sometimes up to three times in the same paragraph) certainly did.
Obviously, it's not the book for me. If the eons-old Persephone acting like a 12-year-old for half the book; the sex scene (first time of the "heroine") happening during an actual descent to hell in a moving chariot with the hero on his feet, one hand holding the reins, the other one simultaneously holding Persephone to him, stroking her hair, undressing himself, and covering her with his arms; the instant-love; the claiming of a baby as the love interest by a very old god; and the spying on a couple having sex didn't clue me in, the change of pov from one sentence to the next (sometimes up to three times in the same paragraph) certainly did.