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Phantasma by Kaylie Smith
3.5
Diverse cast of characters: No

Smut ruined a good idea 😞 Broke the pacing, hindered character development and (for me) likabilit of the MFC. It just didn't feel right.

Blackwell (MMC) absolutely loved him. He said the right things at the right time (except when he threw in some cliche lines during sex).

Overall enjoyed it. Was a nice read. Sad it could have been better will bit less sex scenes and more towards the end, not halfway through.

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