A review by peskridge3
The Third Baseman by Lulu Moore

medium-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Plot
• Strong character development? No
• Loveable characters? No
• Diverse cast of characters? No
• Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

1.0

Wow this was laughably bad. I told myself to DNF so many times but, nevertheless I persevered. Jupiter is a walking red flag and if anyone roots for him…I don’t even have the words. Marnie’s made up job was so incredibly dumb, my mind was continuously blown. Why couldn’t she just be on the analytics team instead of being the director of “baseball science” LMAO. Also, what’s up with all the typos? Was this a first draft that saw no developmental edits? There’s so much more I could say but TLDR: give this a miss