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A review by ellab93
The Life-Changing Magic of Falling in Love by Eve Devon
2.0
The premise of this book was intriguing and I enjoyed how sweet all of the characters were.
However, the main character's stream of consciousness dialogue was so hard to pay attention to. There was so much of it that I felt myself skimming over the text to the point of the story/scene. I think this book could be more interesting with editing and some dialogue removed.
However, the main character's stream of consciousness dialogue was so hard to pay attention to. There was so much of it that I felt myself skimming over the text to the point of the story/scene. I think this book could be more interesting with editing and some dialogue removed.