alassea 's review for:

Valiant by Laurann Dohner
2.0

I'm a little conflicted on my stars. I enjoy the universe and the plight of Species. However, I do NOT enjoy the jarring lack of proofreading. Honestly, syntax matters. I should not have to fill in the missing words on my own! Maybe in fanfiction, but not in a published book.

At any rate, the story brings forward the overall story, I like the main characters, even though I got a bit tired of "OMG he's so big / she's so tiny". Also, I've just read many enough of these now to get that feeling when there is a lull that this is getting to rosy, there will be something bad happening in 3-2-1... I had no surprises in the plot.

So yeah, story was cute, it needs proofreading and I still enjoy the universe, but I don't know if I will read the next book, which I'm guessing involves a certain redhead.