A review by rachaelarsenault
Spells Trouble by P.C. Cast, Kristin Cast

medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

0.25

You can find my in-depth review of this book over on Medium (https://medium.com/@rachaellawrites/buzzword-feminism-and-a-legacy-of-white-saviours-an-in-depth-review-of-spells-trouble-64c563d12a38), but for now I'll offer a quick pros and cons list. 

<b>Pros</b>
-The confrontation/chase in chapter 31 was decent. 
-The concept of gate trees is fascinating and has a lot of potential.
-The concept of a cat turning into a person could be really fun.

<b>Cons</b>
-Mystification and dehumanization of indigenous people without them ever actually being present.
-White savior narrative is the backbone of the world-building. 
-Cultural appropriation with gate trees in the American Midwest being of Japanese, Hindu, Egyptian, Greek, and Norse mythology.
-The only two recurring characters of colour are ambiguously brown and described with fetishizing/exotifying language compared to white characters.
-Contains both misandry and internalized misogyny, as well as sprinklings of slut shaming for good measure.
-Needlessly graphic and inappropriate-for-genre depiction of sex between minors, including descriptions of a 16 year old boy's penis. 
-Misery porn of the only confirmed queer character, constantly tying all of her personal conflicts and hardships back to her queerness. 
-Excessively long sentences, misused words (pixilate vs. pixelate), choppy and disjointed prose, jarringly absurd metaphors and descriptions, out-of-voice word choice, and laughably try-hard attempts at teen speak. 
-Nonsensical exclamations/expletives based on the girls' deity of choice, such as "Freya's cloak!" and "Athena's shield!"
-Hunter's tarot cards are inconsistent with how every other instance of magic has been portrayed.
-Inconsistent about what Xena does and doesn't know as a cat person (calls it a "phone device", but used a cell phone during the climax without issue), and is written in an obnoxiously heavy-handed and repetitive manner. 

If it wasn't already obvious by the low rating and long list of flaws, I really don't recommend this book.

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