A review by kayladbruns
Beautiful Mistake by Vi Keeland

3.0

I didn't like this as much as I was anticipating. It just really fell flat for me. It had so much promise to be more. The chemistry was there, but everything else was not.

I did like the way that Rachel and Cain met and when she found out that she was going to be his TA that semester. Their chemistry was off the charts! No matter how much they tried to deny it. It was almost like a slow burn reading this because you know it's going to happen but it seemed like it never would. When it finally happened, it was amazing!

There were a couple of reason I gave it 2 stars. The main reason was because of the back and forth. Their relationship was unprofessional from the beginning so all the hot and cold wasn't needed. speaking of hot and cold, I couldn't decide if I wanted to slap Cain or root for him. He took forever to tell Rachel that he knew her. He let that drag on way too long.

Rachel, oh Rachel. She wanted to come off as so strong and independent, but this girl put on her running shoes and chased Cain. Every time he pushed back like he wasn't interested, she would try to seduce him to get him to give in. Like I said hot and cold, one minute she was independent and didn't need a man and the next she was crying about re virginizing her vagina (not my words). Umm..just no.

Overall, like I said earlier the chemistry was there but it could have more in the character and story building department.