A review by ashkwtf
More Than This by Jay McLean

2.0

Ugh. Well. The only thing that saved this story was Jake. Makayla was incredibly annoying, irrational, and ... blech. She had really crappy things happen to her. I try to take that into consideration, but she just turned into this turnip. A turnip who really need to have an honest talk with the guy she claimed to love.

Maybe it's that I couldn't buy her reasoning for not wanting to be officially dating Jake. It was all semantic anyway, since they behaved like they were dating.