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A review by ladymcgrace
The Predator by RuNyx
dark
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
1.0
hai๐๐๐ I've never rolled my eyes so much reading a book , not as much as while I was reading the ritual by Shantel Tessier ๐คฃ๐. Heck, I've read fanfics better than this.
The author over explains more than just telling us the story๐๐ฎ, and she /he has this thing where she/he uses the same expressions/ phrases or repeats the same sentences again and again, like let it rest bestie we get It, the boys always and will never hurt children and women๐
Not much is really going on, honestly, especially after the codes go missing. Like guys, what plan are y'all working on to get that person who has the codes, SHOW USโผ๏ธโผ๏ธโผ๏ธโผ๏ธ.
Another thing that vexes me is the author saying how dangerous this Tristen is over and over๐๐๐ Like rest, we get it. he is dangerous. SHOW US ke or SHUT IT hawu ๐ซต๐พ๐ฎ.
And then we come to the reason they hate each other,๐๐๐, 74% in to the book and I still don't know why๐ฎ๐๐ฎ๐๐ค๐ค, Ke-ENGโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธ like Spill already yho.
And the girl, hai, I don't believe the genius claims on herโ๐พโผ๏ธ cause her actions nje are giving mabena๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ
Like, what do you mean You don't have a backup plan, an exit plan for when you are finally fed up with your dad, worse you are computer genius๐โ๐พ, like don't you have like a secret apartment somewhere, Stolen money, boma off shore acount, I mean you Clearly have the brains๐ถ๐พโโ๏ธโผ๏ธ Like a USB stick that has all your father's dirty secrets that you can use to blackmail him.
my sister, the minute he let you fall down the stairs was the time you should have stepped in your villain era. Actually, the time he started pimping you out was the time you should have started plotting his death and all the old rubbish man who touched you!
Kamo wena moana, you decided to tail tristen to that casino. Firstly, that was very stupid because you didn't come up with a backup plan. Should he find out that you followed him.
Secondly, what was the actual reason for following him. I get you were trying to find dirty information to blackmail him into telling you about the alliance so you will know why he hates you, mara that plan was not well thought out cause you didn't get any useful info.
Also, you were under prepared cause what the heck were those
questions you asked in the meeting? they were fairly not specific.๐๐ฎ Ande kamo, I don't see movement on the codes๐ค๐ and that is the only reason im still reading.
I feel like the author didn't balance Moand out, like she tried making her an independent Smart girl mara. She missed the mark, hai
The book ended, and we still don't know who is behind the codes getting stolen, we still don't know the ndabas of the alliance, kuri nje hai
The author over explains more than just telling us the story๐๐ฎ, and she /he has this thing where she/he uses the same expressions/ phrases or repeats the same sentences again and again, like let it rest bestie we get It, the boys always and will never hurt children and women๐
Not much is really going on, honestly, especially after the codes go missing. Like guys, what plan are y'all working on to get that person who has the codes, SHOW USโผ๏ธโผ๏ธโผ๏ธโผ๏ธ.
Another thing that vexes me is the author saying how dangerous this Tristen is over and over๐๐๐ Like rest, we get it. he is dangerous. SHOW US ke or SHUT IT hawu ๐ซต๐พ๐ฎ.
And then we come to the reason they hate each other,๐๐๐, 74% in to the book and I still don't know why๐ฎ๐๐ฎ๐๐ค๐ค, Ke-ENGโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธ like Spill already yho.
And the girl, hai, I don't believe the genius claims on herโ๐พโผ๏ธ cause her actions nje are giving mabena๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ
Like, what do you mean You don't have a backup plan, an exit plan for when you are finally fed up with your dad, worse you are computer genius๐โ๐พ, like don't you have like a secret apartment somewhere, Stolen money, boma off shore acount, I mean you Clearly have the brains๐ถ๐พโโ๏ธโผ๏ธ Like a USB stick that has all your father's dirty secrets that you can use to blackmail him.
my sister, the minute he let you fall down the stairs was the time you should have stepped in your villain era. Actually, the time he started pimping you out was the time you should have started plotting his death and all the old rubbish man who touched you!
Kamo wena moana, you decided to tail tristen to that casino. Firstly, that was very stupid because you didn't come up with a backup plan. Should he find out that you followed him.
Secondly, what was the actual reason for following him. I get you were trying to find dirty information to blackmail him into telling you about the alliance so you will know why he hates you, mara that plan was not well thought out cause you didn't get any useful info.
Also, you were under prepared cause what the heck were those
questions you asked in the meeting? they were fairly not specific.๐๐ฎ Ande kamo, I don't see movement on the codes๐ค๐ and that is the only reason im still reading.
I feel like the author didn't balance Moand out, like she tried making her an independent Smart girl mara. She missed the mark, hai
The book ended, and we still don't know who is behind the codes getting stolen, we still don't know the ndabas of the alliance, kuri nje hai