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A review by sandygx260
Moving Day by Jonathan Stone
1.0
What seemed like an interesting idea ended up bogged down by the writing style. The author loves fractured sentences. Yes, three word sentences are great to break up a paragraph, but too many paragraphs of three word sentences is disconcerting.
Also, calling this a thriller is wrong. Too many chapters ramble on about intent. The author tries too hard to "enter" into various character's thoughts which often brings the "movement" to a screeching thud.
In truth, with proper editing, this might have been a good novella.
I read this is optioned for a movie. Yep, strip out the nonsense and it will be a straight to streaming flick. I don't know, will is be more moving that the novel? Hmm.
Move along, folks... more like move away from reading this book.
Also, calling this a thriller is wrong. Too many chapters ramble on about intent. The author tries too hard to "enter" into various character's thoughts which often brings the "movement" to a screeching thud.
In truth, with proper editing, this might have been a good novella.
I read this is optioned for a movie. Yep, strip out the nonsense and it will be a straight to streaming flick. I don't know, will is be more moving that the novel? Hmm.
Move along, folks... more like move away from reading this book.