A review by klcsl
Upon a Waking Dream by J.S. Bailey

1.5

I really wanted to like this book, but it's not for me. I'm struggling to think of who would actually enjoy it. To say something positive, there are definitely seeds of good storytelling in there, but the writing just doesn't work. I think the author needs to practice their craft more and get an editor/publisher who will help them keep the stories on track and going in a good direction. The stories and writing just feel very immature, like something a really good high school freshman/sophomore would write for a creative project. I really don't mean this to sound rude. I think the author has a lot of potential. They're just not there yet.