A review by demicramb
The Unfinished Line by Jen Lyon

emotional sad medium-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Character
• Strong character development? Yes
• Loveable characters? Yes
• Diverse cast of characters? Yes
• Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

This is a beautiful tragic love story. I'm still feeling it hours after and I probably will feel it days after. Who am I kidding, I'll probably think about this story often and the way it made me feel.

I enjoyed the writing and how the chapters were done in acts. I didn't like the two endings but I suppose we got to see the what could of been and no one gets to see that. As this story was supposed to highlight the pressures on sports athletes it didn't focus much on Dillon's struggles too much. I would have liked to get inside her head more but I guess that's one part of the message.