A review by hamalee
Spells and Sensibility by K.S. Murphy, K.L. Noone

1.0

I usually like meandering character studies, but this was just... repetitive inner monologue after repetitive inner monologue. I like both the characters, but there was no room to tell an actual *story* here because of all the repetitive monologues. An editor slashing at least a third of this with a red pen would tighten it all up to create some actual relationship development and then there'd be room for plot advancement too.