A review by booksbythemonth
Talk Nerdy to Me by Jett Masterson

3.0

Cute but longer than it had any right to be

This book is 450+ pages, but it only covers as much ground as a 250-page book. It wasn't BAD at all, but it really needs a good editor. There's a lot of superfluous stuff that is cute but doesn't drive the story at all, and the grammar/punctuation needs someone to take a hatchet to it. I started out highlighting every issue in my ebook, but I had to stop because it was SO MANY highlights. This book could win a prize for most run-on sentences or maybe most misused commas. Seriously, an editor would up this a star, and a really good editor might even make this 5 stars. The author has a good premise that is reasonably well executed, with totally reasonable prose. Lots of potential here. I will say, the smut is GRATUITOUS. Like, I started skimming it eventually because there was just so much and it was almost never tied into plot at all. If that's your thing, tack on an extra star.