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A review by aster1123
Pros & Cons of Betrayal by A.E. Wasp
2.0
This is really hard to review.
It obviously had an original storyline (based on how it's edited and from the existing blurb that has nothing to do with the current plot) that changed quite drastically.
Carson's reasons for staying away are lame. They should have been better. There should have been more conflict and hard feelings before they made up. Eric should have been madder.
There's a lot that I don't believe or buy, and the editing is sloppy. main plot points currently hinge on something that could not have happened. so that sucks.
Also, this book should have been about half the number pages. which is frustrating because the previous book was way too fast/short. so wtf?! get it together, and get an editor please!
but i love a second chance romance and i loved seeing more of carson's life and thoughts and i'm happy i read it.
It obviously had an original storyline (based on how it's edited and from the existing blurb that has nothing to do with the current plot) that changed quite drastically.
Carson's reasons for staying away are lame. They should have been better. There should have been more conflict and hard feelings before they made up. Eric should have been madder.
There's a lot that I don't believe or buy, and the editing is sloppy. main plot points currently hinge on something that could not have happened. so that sucks.
Also, this book should have been about half the number pages. which is frustrating because the previous book was way too fast/short. so wtf?! get it together, and get an editor please!
but i love a second chance romance and i loved seeing more of carson's life and thoughts and i'm happy i read it.