jasmine_newton 's review for:

The Mystery Guest by Nita Prose

2.0

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Worst than the first one with even more coincidences, character inconsistencies and/or lack of reasoning for so many decisions. Overall just weird and convent actions that feel so outlandish I caught myself being shocked by how dumb something was. Like the people just aren’t written like how people act like they change to fit what is necessary for the plot to take place . With all that said it still kept me entertained, but I was much more distracted by the bad writing this time.