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Don't Kiss the Bride by Carian Cole
2.5
emotional hopeful sad medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

The MMC gave me the ick unfortunately. He was an immature loser creep and no matter how much the FMC tried to convince herself and others that he wasn’t a predator, he definitely was. The FMC was also extremely dramatic and immature. 

The writing was really juvenile and the whole book was predictable. 

There was a lot of time spent on random mundane conversations and events that had absolutely no impact on the plot or characters. Basically there was a lot of unnecessary fluff.

I wish I DNF this but I persisted because I thought maybe it would get better. It did not, and I found myself bored and grossed out most of the book.