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A review by gabi90
Five Minutes Longer by Victoria Sue
2.0
This book turned out to be a disappointment.
I liked the whole idea of this story and that's what kept me going. But I gotta ask, where the hell was the editor? Especially in the first half of the book. The dialogue was weird sometimes, it felt like the two people were talking about two different topics. The sentences were sometimes disconnected. And generally there was something about the writing that rubbed me the wrong way.
I liked Finn, and I liked the team. Their interactions were sweet and teasing.
The romance between Finn and Talon came out of the blue. Yes, they acknowledged how hot they found each other, and there was a sudden kiss, without any lead-up. Same with the sex, it was fast and considering Finn's virgin status, I didn't like it.
I liked the whole idea of this story and that's what kept me going. But I gotta ask, where the hell was the editor? Especially in the first half of the book. The dialogue was weird sometimes, it felt like the two people were talking about two different topics. The sentences were sometimes disconnected. And generally there was something about the writing that rubbed me the wrong way.
I liked Finn, and I liked the team. Their interactions were sweet and teasing.
The romance between Finn and Talon came out of the blue. Yes, they acknowledged how hot they found each other, and there was a sudden kiss, without any lead-up. Same with the sex, it was fast and considering Finn's virgin status, I didn't like it.