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A review by mcintmac
Peacemaker by Morgan Brice
2.0
I wanted to like this, but nearly every aspect of the story disappointed me.
1) The writing: SO MUCH INNER MONOLOGUE. not only is the constant tense switching jarring, but the actual monologues were juvenile
2) The plot: Nothing was surprising and the good guys figured everything out so easily.
3) The romance: this was the most disappointing part. It was somehow insta-love while also 97% of “is he or isn’t he.” They also were separated for most of the plot. Which would be fine, if their relationship developed accordingly. But then they declare their love at the end after having spent most of the book separate. AND THEN we get through 200+ pages of pining only for the big sex scene to (a) start in the middle without any foreplay (iykykh) (b) last two pages and (c) come at 99%
1) The writing: SO MUCH INNER MONOLOGUE. not only is the constant tense switching jarring, but the actual monologues were juvenile
2) The plot: Nothing was surprising and the good guys figured everything out so easily.
3) The romance: this was the most disappointing part. It was somehow insta-love while also 97% of “is he or isn’t he.” They also were separated for most of the plot. Which would be fine, if their relationship developed accordingly. But then they declare their love at the end after having spent most of the book separate. AND THEN we get through 200+ pages of pining only for the big sex scene to (a) start in the middle without any foreplay (iykykh) (b) last two pages and (c) come at 99%