A review by snorey56
The Trouble with Trying to Date a Murderer by Jennifer Cody

Did not finish book. Stopped at 11%.
one is allowed to use complex sentences.
“every patron in the diner started attacking him with bullets and knives and their bodies”. that sentence is just an example of what i’m writing about. find another way to convey what you’re trying to say.
basically the gist of my problem with the book is - it’s written like a bad wattpad book. like a 14 year old sat down and decided to write a fanfic - that’s the vibe.