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A review by natalierogers
Iced Out by Veronica Eden
3.0
I enjoyed the book but there were a few things that just bothered me about how it was written. I liked that there was no third act break up that got resolved after 5 pages but i do wish there was more drama to keep it interesting.
I really didn’t like how much the time jumped throughout the book. They would be talking about something that’s coming up then the next paragraph starts with a single sentence saying how it went. I feel like there could have been more in depth experiences that were just brushed over instead.
Then when he didn’t propose and she hears that he called her his fiancé that’s how it ends? we didn’t get to see the interaction of her hearing him ask or getting a ring or anything… I didn’t love that. I wish the epilogue was after they were married or at least further into the relationship.
Also she never was introduced to his mom and brother in the book until that last scene. That’s was strange to me since he met her family.
I really didn’t like how much the time jumped throughout the book. They would be talking about something that’s coming up then the next paragraph starts with a single sentence saying how it went. I feel like there could have been more in depth experiences that were just brushed over instead.
Then when he didn’t propose and she hears that he called her his fiancé that’s how it ends? we didn’t get to see the interaction of her hearing him ask or getting a ring or anything… I didn’t love that. I wish the epilogue was after they were married or at least further into the relationship.
Also she never was introduced to his mom and brother in the book until that last scene. That’s was strange to me since he met her family.