willow_wisp32 's review for:

The Training Session by Joey W. Hill
3.0

A continuation in the Naughty Bits series, and it still isn't a complete story. This one only includes rising action, and it takes place directly after the events in the previous book. Not my cup of tea, despite some good parts.

Spoiler

There is a m/m scene that is pretty darn great. And it would've been so easy for the author to make Logan bisexual or something, but after the m/m scene the author tries really, really hard to make Logan seems SUPER STRAIGHT and like an all-American, macho man. For instance, when he is lustfully looking at Madison, it is described as such: "He was looking at her as if she were naked and holding a beer. As well as a universal remote to an eighty-inch flat screen, programmed only with sports channels." And his penis is compared to steak and potatoes. That's now officially my least favorite way to describe male genatalia.