A review by tumbleweed1991
Axiom by Dakota Krout, Dennis Vanderkerken

Did not finish book.
Sound effects, are used in almost every line, which is extremely jarring. Italics over used with no reason as to why they're even being used. Point of view changes frequently, sometimes multiple times in a single page, with very little to indicate who the point of view is coming from.

The bad people are laughably 2D and are just obnoxious.

I really wanted to enjoy this book, but the writing is so bad I gave up after the first couple of chapters before I even got to the cultivation.

Considering I loved Dakota Krouts other series, I think this book was written almost entirely by Dennis with Krouts name tacked on to increase sales