4.0

This is a very cute and genuine story.. and kind of sad in some aspects. I'd love to read more to find out what happens with the young girl... She's precious!! The only things that bothered me slightly is that some artwork is difficult to distinguish with the page being flooded with pen work, and some of the dialogue bubbles are not correctly drawn, where it's not easy to figure out who is saying what, and the sounds are drawn like they are being said instead of just making sounds. That's why I took a star off, other than that though, seems like a very interesting story!