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tisha_s 's review for:
Unexpected Pass
by A. Blossom
adventurous
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Meh.
Started off great, had my attention until about 60% and then I lost interest. Felt like the story was trying too many different plots in less than 300 pages.
So the quick fixes of complicated family drama, made the resolution too fictional. Which really undermined all that good writing in the beginning.
Also- saying the baby had the dimples of a man, who is not his biological father is a choice. Like the FMC stresses the paternity of this child throughout the book. So reading that line took me out… like ma’am… how?! Why?
That’s when I knew this story had gone off the deep end.
Started off great, had my attention until about 60% and then I lost interest. Felt like the story was trying too many different plots in less than 300 pages.
So the quick fixes of complicated family drama, made the resolution too fictional. Which really undermined all that good writing in the beginning.
Also- saying the baby had the dimples of a man, who is not his biological father is a choice. Like the FMC stresses the paternity of this child throughout the book. So reading that line took me out… like ma’am… how?! Why?
That’s when I knew this story had gone off the deep end.