olivesarchive 's review for:

You Will Be Mine by Natasha Preston

2.0

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Plot line was alright, but the execution was not. Cover says that author, Natasha Preston, is a wattpad sensation, and I can tell. What person sees her friends mutilated bodies and continues to rant about her crush and dead parents??? and then after 6 people die, continue to go clubbing and pretending to live normally? and publicly conversing with the suspect’s brother? also the ending was predictable and honestly just sad for the actual killer. like his motives are so depressing. they also spend the entire book assuming that person J is the killer, and by the end i was almost hoping that it was true. Even though I love when the killer is unexpected, it was embarrassing watching them all make that assumption with hardly any real evidence. It was conceited on Lylah’s part to assume it was all her fault, even though it was.
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i feel as though this story were shorter, it may have been better. as a short story instead of a novel, since there was seemingly a lot of unneeded information.