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Fire Line by Maggie Gates
4.0

When they say enemies to lovers, usually there's a good reason for the enemy. In this case they just fucked outside a bar and then she started working for his family.
My other issue was every single fricking time he said, "That's my name on the building." I wanted to scream because it wasn't his name it was his families name. His family who had been working there. He didn't even own the enterprise his sister in law was doing more of the organizing on the day to day he just did the labor aspect. Which is still important, but he wasn't the one growing the business. Not to mention, he was complaining about all the changes as if he's not a grown man. Lastly, he read her work file, which he never should've had access to because it is a blatant disregard of her privacy. Dude was the ultimate nepo baby.

Now that I've gotten all my complaints out of the way, here's the good. He was good at asking for forgiveness. By the end, I was truly rooting for them instead of just screaming that she needed to get the hell outta Texas. The overarching brother plot was intreating, and I was truly shocked by the surprise villain. I honestly did have a good time reading this.