pioneer 's review for:

Chaos by Hilary Storm
3.0

3.5 almost-there-stars. Almost there.

I actually got trapped in this story when things got amped up. I was so intrigued with Travis and Cambri that I was lost in the story. That was... until the intense bit kinda got resolved, and then it felt... very "eh" to me.

The writing kinda went from 100 to 0 real fast after the resolve too so... yeah.