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The Octunnumi Fosbit Files Prologue by Trevor Alan Foris
DID NOT FINISH: 16%
This book has some potential if a skilled editor could comb through it a few times. The sentence structures were confusing and the tenses kept shifting. Not much in the way of plot and the characters introduced so far feel flat. It's a decent premise in theory, but this book misses on the execution. 
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