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A review by rosexgold
Bob Honey Who Just Do Stuff by Sean Penn
3.0
For how short this was, it took me foreverrrrrr to get through.
It was fine. Sooo many alliterations. Sometimes it worked. Sometimes it took away the meaning for me.
I don't know why the reviews for this are soooooo bad though. It wasn't amazing but it wasn't awful. If I was into more experimental/creative writing styles I would have enjoyed this more. But it was a totally fine story. All the footnotes were totally unnecessary for me though. Either say right away what your abbreviations are, or just don't use abbreviations at all. Don't explain them to me in a footnote. It got very old, very fast.
It was fine. Sooo many alliterations. Sometimes it worked. Sometimes it took away the meaning for me.
I don't know why the reviews for this are soooooo bad though. It wasn't amazing but it wasn't awful. If I was into more experimental/creative writing styles I would have enjoyed this more. But it was a totally fine story. All the footnotes were totally unnecessary for me though. Either say right away what your abbreviations are, or just don't use abbreviations at all. Don't explain them to me in a footnote. It got very old, very fast.