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The Asylum Confessions by Jack Steen
3.0

Disturbing. Entertaining. It needed more of the graphic details that were taken out. I feel those details would have made it that much more interesting. I do have to admit that it keeps the stories mysterious but I feel they need the IT factor of the details. The whole point is that serial killers are confessing. I NEED the details. It would have made the stories more raw and not told so quickly. Also, there were so many typos and grammatical errors. It needed to be edited better.