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The Second Death of Locke by V.L. Bovalino
4.0
adventurous medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No

it was good, just not 5 stars for me. It is a straightforward fantasy, I wanted more mystery surrounding Grey’s background but that was revealed very quickly. I feel like there is telling rather than showing. 

I also wanted more communication between Grey and Keir- they can't seem to talk about their mutual feelings for one another despite the fact that they have an unbreakable bond and years of partnership.
I believe I would have liked to read Keir's POV because I love men yearning!!