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tasha29 's review for:
The Marked and the Broken
by Ivy Asher
This is such a simultaneously small detail in the book and yet is mentioned so much throughout the series.
She can magically remove all the hair from her body.
Ok, I get it, female empowerment do whatever you want with your body, but does it have to be mentioned so much.
Also there is a vampire or ‘lambia’ now in the harem or ‘chosen’ and it’s like PLEASE STOP I HATE ALL THESE CHARACTERS STOP ADDING MORE.
Sorry.
I actually like the werewolf and ‘lambia’ addition to the harem (because I hate all the Paladin or whatever their called).
—-Spoilers—-
Also such a cheap shot to kill Lachlan and killian the two characters that I liked outside of the vinna circle jerk.
But then Lachlan dies but then…..
Vaugh is alive!!!!
But he’s also completely brain dead and basically listens and obeys commands and that’s it?
I would have preferred Lachlan have a redemption arc about accepting his brothers daughter and not seeing his dead brother but his niece, if that makes sense.
I wanted them to bond when they were both captured by the lamia but he was just mean to her again.
Like huh?
He’s a PALADIN (basically the police force of their world)
And he can’t prioritise strategising with the Sentinel that will help him get out of the cell they’re in???
I don’t know if this is just lazy writing or poor character development but I just don’t feel like this is what the Lachlan is book one would do.
I’m going to read the next book just to continue with the series but.
I’m just disappointed, I had high hopes for the Vinna being captured arc and it just fell flat for me.
She can magically remove all the hair from her body.
Ok, I get it, female empowerment do whatever you want with your body, but does it have to be mentioned so much.
Also there is a vampire or ‘lambia’ now in the harem or ‘chosen’ and it’s like PLEASE STOP I HATE ALL THESE CHARACTERS STOP ADDING MORE.
Sorry.
I actually like the werewolf and ‘lambia’ addition to the harem (because I hate all the Paladin or whatever their called).
—-Spoilers—-
Also such a cheap shot to kill Lachlan and killian the two characters that I liked outside of the vinna circle jerk.
But then Lachlan dies but then…..
Vaugh is alive!!!!
But he’s also completely brain dead and basically listens and obeys commands and that’s it?
I would have preferred Lachlan have a redemption arc about accepting his brothers daughter and not seeing his dead brother but his niece, if that makes sense.
I wanted them to bond when they were both captured by the lamia but he was just mean to her again.
Like huh?
He’s a PALADIN (basically the police force of their world)
And he can’t prioritise strategising with the Sentinel that will help him get out of the cell they’re in???
I don’t know if this is just lazy writing or poor character development but I just don’t feel like this is what the Lachlan is book one would do.
I’m going to read the next book just to continue with the series but.
I’m just disappointed, I had high hopes for the Vinna being captured arc and it just fell flat for me.