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ellicasmom 's review for:
Beautiful Bastard
by Christina Lauren
Like so many others, the original fic "The Office" was one of my all-time twific faves. I ADORED it. It was hot and there was real character development. Or, maybe because it was fanfic I felt I already KNEW the characters. Either way, there sure was more of an introduction and build to their relationship in the original. This just blew past any getting-to-know-yous and within a few hundred words, there was sex. meh. By the time he is running his hand up her skirt, I dont even have an idea of what they look like! Except the fact that he is "hot". Sorry, that's just not enough for me. Smut is good, but this story had the potential for so much more. (I know because I READ THAT POTENTIAL YEARS AGO)bummer. 3 stars for hot secks scenes.