seashelly 's review for:

Priest of Bones by Peter McLean
1.0

This is quite honestly the "Hey can I copy your homework?" "Yeah but don't make it too obvious" meme. I legit texted a friend about how it felt like a weird Peaky Blinders fanfic from page one.

God, mr author, please actually utilise the 'show don't tell' tool next time. We get it, the main character is dangerous. He respects women. All that good stuff. How about that's just shown through the actions the protagonist takes, and them only?